Omai. That's sexah. I can't really see anything wrong with this. The only thing that catches my eye when staring at it for a while is the top part of her right ankle. It might just be me but it looks like it bends in a weird way to me D:
But god. This looks really nice c:

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<333 Thank you, Merc. I see what you mean - I enlarged the foot in PS because it was too small, but I guess I didn't fix the ankle. That, and I was prolly trying to be all stylistic... and it failed. xD Thanks!

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Her shoulders seem to be a bit to broad and the tail looks a bit awkward. Her pinkie finger (the one closest to her face) looks a bit squished since the knuckle is larger than the base of the finger.

Other than that, I don't see much else wrong with her. *nods*

How do you think I could fix the shoulders? Sloping them more... bringing the edge of the arm closer to her body?

Ah, the pinkie finger. I would have fixed that. This is a 4-inch doodle blown up, btw. xD

Not sure how I'd do the tail. I was trying to put it in there, but I couldn't figure out how. I didnt want it all up around her ffet, or curling beside her... It was supposed t look like it kindof... fell over to the side as it drooped over the bed.

Thanks for the critz, homie! I appreciate it. <3

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The slope's fine; I'd just bring the edge of the arm in a smidgen. *nods*

Ah... *nods*


Well, it looks like it's coming from between her legs. Maybe a more defined bump at the base to show where it starts?

Right, right.

LOL, OH. xD Okay, I gotcha. WHOOPS. Oh God, I can't stop laughing. xD

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Hiya! I got your critique request, so here I am. To be honest, I'm not real keen on pointing out flaws, but I'll try to keep your request and apparent intent (as suggested by the picture) in mind. I usually recommend that people practice and then draw another picture rather than obsessing over a single drawing, so you can apply what I say either way.

First off, I think you did a nice job on this. The quality of the anatomy is above average. I'm especially attracted to the details of her fingers and toes. Her arm, shoulder, and collarbone area have lovely lines too.

If you really want critique, I'll focus on the face and hair. Just remember that I don't think any of this is bad: I'm just pointing out areas you could kill a few trees on and be happy with the results.

Face: very lean and narrow. Now, this might be what you intended given her elvish look, but if so it might be good to make her head a little bigger overall to keep it a good fit for her body. example

If portraits/heads are difficult for you, here is an exercise that might help. I have trouble fitting heads on bodies too, so you're not alone there.

Also, it looks like her hairline drops a little low and the hair nearest her head is drawn flat against her skull. Move the hairline up a tad and fluff the locks around her skull; both head and hair will look better.

The other slight nitpick would be the hair falling over her left shoulder (and I mean her left, so it's toward the right edge of the picture). I have curly hair, and it's hard to draw . What I've been doing lately is 5-30 second studies on scratch paper. At work, when I watch the desk, I scribble random people's hairstyles on old shipment slips. At home, it's fun to do studies out of hairstyle magazines. Great Hair is a nice reference with lots of different styles. You might be able to find it or something similar at your library.

Depending on her physique and how much depth you want in the picture, you could also pull her butt to the right a little to increase the overlap factor. On the other hand, if she has a long back, it's probably fine where it is.

Again I think you did a nice job with this; with the possible exception of the head, your anatomy is looking good; you have some beautiful lines. I would encourage you to do a few hair and portrait studies and then draw another picture instead of overworking this one, but that's up to you.

Keep up the good work.

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I really appreciate the padding you put down there xD <3

Actually fitting the heads on the bodies has proven a little much at times. Hairlines, too. She's supposed to have a really prominent widow's peak, but I'm not always sure how to pull that off so it looks nice. Thanks for the links. :'D

To be completely honest, her butt's huge. xD Now that I'm looking over the picture more, I don't think that's coming across so much... I'll experiment with that.

HAHAGHSGHS THANK YOU SO MUCH! <3<3<3

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